ah, shows in great detail how much relaxation painting can be, inspiring
ah, shows in great detail how much relaxation painting can be, inspiring
Thanks man!
not enough memes
10/10
420/69 *airhorn noises*
I like your voice, it has potential :D the jokes are funny, the delivery is a bit "weak", and the animation could use a lot more work (draw some more poses, make it visually interesting)
keep it up :)
I sincerely thank you for your compliments and criticisms, I will make sure to keep them into account during the creation of future videos.:)
only 2 people?! you guys are insane... too bad i can only give 5 stars
hahah - thank you :)
loved the elephants poem :) the wise owl, seeing pain in the world, the playful young elephant, not a care in the world
visually, i love the children books approach, clean and soft, but you could've added some background to make it more appealing and show some depth to the video
your sound design could use some work, maybe some (more) music on the background to fill in the empty spaces, or give it some depth since your audio recording is very flat. the triggered sfx (you can deffo hear that you've heard it before in a different video with loud volume, not wanting to put someone else through it) was a bit too long and "empty"
keep it up! :)
Thanks for the feedback! I did some video's where there is music under the whole thing, and that is indeed much better. I'll keep that in mind for future video's.
Good thing you said about the background. I normally draw real children books with all the background stuff and a lot more precision, but that's too much work for such a video. I think I'll try some simple backgrounds next time. A color or trees, and at least a floor.
And about the triggered sfx you're totally right, but normally I post it on youtube and that is the end card with subscribe etc.
Thanks again, this is feedback were I can work with!
greetings,
Aldo
I love this idea, but i feel like the execution could have been waaay better if you put just a little more time into it, make the text on screen look like its running from a computer, have the cursor have the please wait symbol, those kinds of things.
but still liked it :)
That would have been a great idea! Thanks for the feedback.
haha xD that was great! i thought at first the apple would be rotten by the time he got there... so yeah, you got me there :P awesome job!
The rotten apple could have been also a good idea x)
the animation part is very simple, maybe too simple, but your story was strong!
keep on growing :D
Thanks!
I'm not much of an animator, so I just use a few pictures I draw and do what i can to tell a story. Simple, yet effective. XD
Thanks again for watching and reviewing!
pretty good! try mounting your camera next time so the image wont be this shaky, if you dont have a mount, a stack of books and tape could do wonders :P also try adding a couple lamps to your set, to make sure the colour and brightness stay the same as much as possible. other than that, well done!
Thank you and I'm glad you liked it, very helpful comment too! well ill try that next time i tackle stop motion in a few days!
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