Blipsqueek's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Jesse J. Jones – Animation Reel (2017)]

that paper airplane and what comes after... so good!

[The Riddle]

that ending had me xD

[Sonic Freedom Trailer]

your easing could use a bit more work, as in speeding up and down, it feels a bit slow, other than that.. WICKED!! the movements sonic make are insanely good! well done :D

[banana (fist animation)]

pretty impressive for a first animation, well done!

but,
the "dont judge" part... if you really think its shit, and you really dont wanna be judged, dont upload it.

[A poem]

loved the elephants poem :) the wise owl, seeing pain in the world, the playful young elephant, not a care in the world

visually, i love the children books approach, clean and soft, but you could've added some background to make it more appealing and show some depth to the video

your sound design could use some work, maybe some (more) music on the background to fill in the empty spaces, or give it some depth since your audio recording is very flat. the triggered sfx (you can deffo hear that you've heard it before in a different video with loud volume, not wanting to put someone else through it) was a bit too long and "empty"

keep it up! :)

Aldo-de-Vos responds:

Thanks for the feedback! I did some video's where there is music under the whole thing, and that is indeed much better. I'll keep that in mind for future video's.

Good thing you said about the background. I normally draw real children books with all the background stuff and a lot more precision, but that's too much work for such a video. I think I'll try some simple backgrounds next time. A color or trees, and at least a floor.
And about the triggered sfx you're totally right, but normally I post it on youtube and that is the end card with subscribe etc.

Thanks again, this is feedback were I can work with!
greetings,
Aldo

[Stay Positive]

that ending was awesome xD well done!!! loved it!

[Waiting for the Bus!]

NOOOO!! NOT THE BUSDRIVER!!! :'(

I loved this, maybe one of the best i've ever seen from you guys

[Return To Skyrim]

this made me pregnant so awesome... imma dude

10/10 asses <3

[Can Windows 10 Handle a Stick Figure]

I love this idea, but i feel like the execution could have been waaay better if you put just a little more time into it, make the text on screen look like its running from a computer, have the cursor have the please wait symbol, those kinds of things.

but still liked it :)

EricHarper responds:

That would have been a great idea! Thanks for the feedback.